[請教]求職英文自傳如何修改 | 任職期間英文
我先幫忙修改你第一段(?)文章文法/用字上的問題.p.s.因為我時間有限,不可能一次改好,如果你很急,建議你找專業的公司幫你修改.1.IwasborninHsinChuinA.D.19XX.->Hsinchu或Hsin-chu;年份之前不需加A.D.2.Myfatherisengagedworksinindoordecorationthefieldofinteriordesign,andmymotherisahousewife.3.Sincemychildhood,myparentshavetaughtmeinademocraticway.Ihavelearnedtocommunicatewithpeopleandsolveproblemonmyown.4.AndthusTherefore,Ihavegot(developed)theabilitytheskilloftocommunicatingcommunicatewithpeople.5.Besid...
我先幫忙修改你第一段(?)文章文法/用字上的問題.p.s. 因為我時間有限, 不可能一次改好, 如果你很急, 建議你找專業的公司幫你修改.
1. I was born in HsinChu in A.D. 19XX. -> Hsinchu 或 Hsin-chu; 年份之前不需加 A.D.
2. My father is engaged works in indoor decoration the field of interior design, and my mother is a housewife.
3. Since my childhood, my parents have taught me in a democratic way.
I have learned to communicate with people and solve problem on my own.
4. And thus Therefore, I have got (developed) the ability the skill of to communicating communicate with people.
5. Besides I have been taught to be a diligent, cautious and friendly person who was , and I am (用現在式就好了, 因為你還存在啊!) ready to accept the challenge and pressures of people under the any circumstance.
6. Since my childhood, When I was little/Since I was a little boy (避免重複使用相同的句子) I was very interested in mathematics.
7. I like understanding the reasoning behind the answers but not just memorizing them. without parroting.