一封英文email竟讓客戶取消合作》appreciate for your help...9個 ... | 首次交易英文
“Weneedtodiscussabouttheissue.”“Pleasecontactwithhim.”“Iappreciateforyourhelp”這些句子唸起來很順阿,但怎麼又覺得怪怪的?來看看究竟發生了什麼問題吧!傑克在與客戶討論完新的產品企劃後的隔天,傳了一封email給他。沒想到,後來那位客戶就突然取消了合作。一封email怎麼就讓傑克流失了一位客戶,這中間到底出了什麼問題呢?讓我們來看看信的內容吧! DearMr.Clark, Fortheprojectwediscussedaboutyesterday,wereallyappreciateforyourprecioussuggestions.Asyoumentioned,itistrulyadisasterthattheproduct’sappearan...
“We need to discuss about the issue.”“Please contact with him.”“I appreciate for your help”
這些句子唸起來很順阿,但怎麼又覺得怪怪的?來看看究竟發生了什麼問題吧!
傑克在與客戶討論完新的產品企劃後的隔天,傳了一封 email 給他。沒想到,後來那位客戶就突然取消了合作。一封 email怎麼就讓傑克流失了一位客戶,這中間到底出了什麼問題呢?讓我們來看看信的內容吧!
Dear Mr. Clark,
For the project we discussed about yesterday, we really appreciate for your precious suggestions. As you mentioned, it is truly a disaster that the product’s appearance lacked of beauty. We will emphasize on the coloring and texture, making it more elegant and smoother. You also mentioned about the package design. We are now considering to redesign it to make it more compact. The new prototype of the product should reach at your company before next Friday. Please feel free to contact with me if there are any further questions. It is our responsibility to make the product approach to perfection.
Sincerely yours,Jack
關於昨天的討論,我們很謝謝您對企劃所提出的寶貴建議。就像您說的,產品的外觀缺乏美感是非常嚴重的問題。我們會強調配色與材質的選...