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DearMr/Msxxx, IwouldliketoapologizeforthefaultydatawepresentedinthebusinessmeetingwithBonbonEnterprisesLtd(Bonbon)on23November,theestimatedannualrevenueshouldbeHKD$50million,insteadofHKD$5million.ItcausedourcompanytoloseadealwithBonbon.Weknowyouandtherestofthemanagementteamarefrustratedbythisincident. Tohelpsolvetheissue,wehaveimmediatelydeliveredourapologytoMrWhite,theGeneralManagerofBonbonandsenthimthecorrectinformation.Herepliedtousthathewillstudythedataandcontactusifhehasfur...
Dear Mr/Ms xxx,
I would like to apologize for the faulty data we presented in the business meeting with Bonbon Enterprises Ltd (Bonbon) on 23 November, the estimated annual revenue should be HKD$50 million, instead of HKD$5 million. It caused our company to lose a deal with Bonbon. We know you and the rest of the management team are frustrated by this incident.
To help solve the issue, we have immediately delivered our apology to Mr White, the General Manager of Bonbon and sent him the correct information. He replied to us that he will study the data and contact us if he has further questions.
We promise we won’t make the same mistake in the future. Please feel free to propose any remedial actions that we can make to help forge closer ties with Bonbon. Thank you very much.
Best regards,(Your name)
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